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my first attempt at Hindi poetry


#1
Bhor Hui hua sawera
Jage fir kuch armaan ..
Ugte hue sooraj ki tarah
Raat ki khamoshi ki apni hi jagah h
Jo din pe likhe
Ese shayar ab kaha hain

#2
Behtareen alfazo ki aarzoo hain har shayar KO mana
Par ye zamaana kadar krta
Unhi nacheezo ki Jo un alfazo se chnd kagaaz per shat pratishat ank laate
Un alfazo ki nahi Jo kahaaniya bayaan karte
Naino me moti le aate

Comments

Unknown said…
Har pathak ko sunane ki adat h apni kahani kisi aur ki zubani
Un palo ki un yado ki jo umang bharte h usne
Un rato ki un bato ki jo dard me kati h usne...
Yad rkhna e sathi
Har kavita puri h
Jab tak use likhne ki dhuri h
Nacheez to bhot hote h
Shat pratishat k layak
Bas sachche kavi vo hi bn pate h
Jo hote h nalayak
Fuk fuk kr kadam rkhna unhe ata nhi
Or apni kavita pr se unka ghamand jata nhi
Isha said…
yuthika
aap tareef kar gaye ye suna gaye (lol)
kehna itna hi h muje
ki ek kavi har shaqs me basa hota
zarurat hain to bas pehchanane ki

thanks for your valuable thoughts. glad. :)
mudit joshi said…
shame aksar kai yaadein apne sang lati h

kale badalo sa asman kabhi
narangi sa shitij,ankahi si umang lati h
likh do de din par bhi likhne vale
par din me vo dard kaha

jo kali raatein apne sang lati h
Isha said…
Yaadein ek khatti meethi poodia hoti h
Kisiko asmaan ka kalapan raas aata h
Toh kisiko gunguni dhoop ka sama bhata h
Sochne ki shamta hamari h
Raato se dard yaad krna chahte h
Ya uski khamoshi m
Khud ki awaaz pehchaanana chahte h
:)
mudit joshi said…
yaddon ke samundar me gote lagakar
main kabhi kabhi pata e sahil dhoondhta hu
kalikh si chupi jo raaton me
main gunguni dhoop ka pata e asman dhoondhta hu
khamoshi me dhoondhte h khudko "isha"
jinhe nafrat h khud ki awaz se
main "mudit" to shor ko bhi sannata samajh
khud ke andar pata e insan dhoondhta hu
Isha said…
Though I disagree at few points....nevertheless well said.
mudit joshi said…
if everybody agrees at all the points...
then whats the need of writing poetry..
neverthelss:) thank you...just trying to learn from u:):p
Isha said…
Learn! ....epic exaggeration !
mudit joshi said…
hahaha:)
well there is always some truth in exaggerated version of such epics:)
no really .u r doing superb work,,continue with ur blog...
and for sure i will be a regular visitor to your blog:)